a poetical response following close observation: pebbles for rivers of stones
You've captured a lovely moment there Sandra, and I can picture it very clearly.
I had a glorious sunset to drive home through yesterday but it never occurred to me to 'small stone' it. I love your food analogy here.
Thank you both - I felt slightly guilty at putting in two stones today, but it (the dawn) as too good to be ignored.
What an original metaphor, Sandra! Delicious!