a poetical response following close observation: pebbles for rivers of stones
Friday, 8 July 2011
Heard from the garage below my room
Decreasing husky rasp of door support in metal runners
Sharp click as catch slides over aluminium lip
Burble from the radio becomes a sudden silence
He’s finished playing motorbikes for the day
Wonderful, I love your observation. :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Susannah - aros certainly makes one think more about describing daily happenings doesn't it?
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