a poetical response following close observation: pebbles for rivers of stones
This one really resonated with me, I used to live near a primary school (as well as working in one).
I love "grass-blown screams"
Thank you - I was initially astonished at how threatening and alien it sounded, before I'd identified the source.
Wow. You convey a sense of the sinister extremely well. I felt a bit of relief when you reveal the sounds' source.